yea í kinda like the theme of your map milky, not bad for a first!. But as nitram also mention, there is some critical problems.
Heres a quick checklist for ya:
Fix the shader issue (so all textures behave properly and make the right sound)
Add the missing water texture to your pk3.
Line up some of your brushes right. (so there is no gap between them)
Remove all windows, as i doubt they will work. (cant see enemy through them)
Some of your texture dont fit right (like the lamps in the above tunnels and so)
Also try to have another look at your lightning in general.
Keep mapping!
